A.
IDENTIFYING TYPES OF PARAGRAPH
A paragraph is much more than a collection
of connected sentences. It is a building block of essay development, and
paragraphs provide the structure needed to develop the thesis of a paper. In
fact, a useful way to think about a paragraph is as a “mini-essay,” or an essay
within an essay, with its own mini-thesis (the topic sentence), middle or body
(the supporting details) and end or conclusion (the concluding sentence). To
understand how paragraphs help to develop a thesis, think of them as landmarks
on a map. With each paragraph, you describe where you are standing and point
the direction for your readers to make sure they complete the journey to your
conclusion. A vague signpost or a detour down a side trail could well have your
readers lost and wondering where you are taking them. Clear signals, on the
other hand, in the form of clearly worded topic sentences, relevant support,
reasonable interpretations of material, and logical conclusions will help your
readers follow the development of your ideas.
The link between clear, logical organization and effective
communication is powerful, both for the "sender" and the
"receiver." For the writer, a well organized outline of information
serves as a blue print for action. It provides focus and direction as the
writer composes the document, which helps to ensure that the stated purpose is
fulfilled. For the reader, clear organization greatly enhances the ease with
which one can understand and remember the information being presented. People
seek out patterns to help make sense of information. When the reader is not
able to find a pattern that makes sense, chaos and confusion abound. Effective
communication, then, begins with a clearly organized set of ideas following a
logical, consistent pattern. Thus, one of the most important decisions a writer
makes concerns the pattern of organization that is used to structure and order
information.
There are many patterns a writer can use to organize his/her
ideas. The specific pattern (or combination of patterns) chosen depends upon
the particular topic and the objectives the writer has identified for the
document. There is no rule to follow in choosing a pattern of organization; one
must simply think carefully about which pattern makes the most sense in helping
the reader to better understand and remember the information. There are many
different ways of organizing the same information, and often two or more
different organizational patterns are combined to create a final outline of
information.
The most commonly used
patterns of organization are described below
Sequence of dates and events
When using a chronological pattern, each main
section of information represents a particular period of time, and the
sub-points contained within each main section refer to significant events that
occurred within that time frame. A variation of this organizational pattern
involves dividing a topic into "past-present-future" or"
before-during-after" segments.
For example, suppose a writer's stated purpose is
to describe the historical development and evolution of the city of Seattle.
Assuming that Seattle is 100 years old, the writer could organize the
information by grouping it into four 25-year chunks. In this case, the
sub-points within each main section of time represent the most significant
events that occurred during that particular time frame. Notice that by breaking
the 100 year span into distinct 25 year chunks, the writer can create an
outline that follows the guidelines of outlining described under
"Principles of Organizing." This outline contains four mutually
exclusive and balanced sections of information
Sequence of dates and events Example
I. 1895 - 1920
- Significant
Event # 1
- Significant
Event # 2
II. 1920 - 1945
- Significant
Event # 1
- Significant
Event # 2
III. 1945 - 1970
- Significant
Event # 1
- Significant
Event # 2
IV. 1970 - 1995
- Significant
Event # 1
- Significant
Event # 2
Sequence
of steps
For example, suppose a writer's stated purpose
is to explain how wine is made. A sequential pattern would be effective in this
case because it breaks the process down into a specific series of steps which
should be followed in a precise order. Notice that a series of related smaller
steps are grouped into one larger category. Thus, a process which involves many
specific steps can be simplified by highlighting the most fundamental steps,
which helps the reader understand the process and remember its key parts.
Sequential
Pattern Example
I. Step One: Harvest the
grapes
- Harvesting
procedure number one
- Harvesting
procedure number two
II.
Step Two: Prepare the grapes
- Preparation
procedure number one
- Preparation
procedure number two
III.
Step Three: Ferment the grapes
- Fermenting
procedure number one
- Fermenting
procedure number two
IV.
Step Four: Press the grapes
- Pressing
procedure number one
- Pressing
procedure number two
V.
Step Five: Age the wine
- Aging
procedure number one
- Aging
procedure number two
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Order
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Example
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first,
second, third, etc.
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First, you need to become a leader of a
political party.
Second, you need to win a seat in the House of Commons. Third, your party must have a majority of seats. |
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both
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Both Vancouver and Halifax have
rain in the spring.
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in the
beginning
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In the beginning, you need
to become a leader of a political party.
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before
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Before becoming the prime minister,
you need to become the leader of a political party.
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then
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Then, you must win a seat in the House
of Commons.
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after
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After winning a seat in the House
of Commons, you must make sure you have a majority of seats.
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finally
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Finally, after all these steps, you can
call yourself the Prime Minister.
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at last
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At last, you can call yourself the Prime
Minister.
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subsequently
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Subsequently, you must
make sure you have a majority of seats in the House of Commons.
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List
of characteristics
List of characteristic or description
creates a strong impression of your topic: It shows how the topic looks,
sounds, smells, tastes, or feels. Four Basics of List of characteristic
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It creates a main impression — an overall effect or image — about the topic.
2 It uses specific examples to create the
impression.
3
It supports the examples with details that appeal to the senses — sight,
hearing, smell, taste, and touch.
4
It brings a person, place, or object to life for the readers.
Let’s see
the paragraph below for example:
Goldfish
Goldfish
make the best pets for three reasons. First of all, goldfish are very quiet.
They don't bark, howl, meow, chirp, squawk, screech,1 or race around the house
at night while you and your neighbors are trying to sleep. Second, they are economical.
You can buy a goldfish at your local pet store for about 50<£, and a small
bowl for it costs less than $3.00. Water is practically free. Also, they eat
only a pinch of dried fish food daily, so their food bill is quite low. Third,
goldfish are very well behaved. They don't have teeth, so they can't chew your
furniture or bite your guests. They don't ever go outside, so they can't dig
holes in your garden. In addition, you don't have to spend hours teaching them
commands such as "Sit!" or "Heel!" If you want a quiet and
economical pet that doesn't cause any trouble, visit your nearest goldfish
store.
Cause
and Effect
Cause and effect paragraphs analyze the
causes or the effects of something or the relationship between both. If you
want to explain the “why” of something—a process, an event, a concept—then this
is a useful pattern. In this pattern, transitions of logic (e.g., thus,
therefore, consequently, as a result) and words and phrases of cause and effect
(e.g., because, for the reason that, given that, in effect) feature
prominently. Be careful, however, when you make statements about cause and
effect. If there is more than one cause to a particular effect, be sure not to
restrict your analysis or explanation. On the other hand, if there is more than
one effect, be sure not to assume they all arose from the same cause. To be
sure there is a connection between the causes and effects you are analyzing or
explaining, ask questions like “Is this the only thing that could cause this
effect?” and “Is this the only possible effect this cause could have?” and “Was
this cause sufficient to result in this effect?” (Horner, 1988, p.127).
For example:
An avalanche is a huge snow slide that rushes
down the side of a mountain, carrying large trees, rocks, and other debris in
its path. Avalanches are similar to landslides but can be more dangerous and
destructive. Avalanches can occur when huge amounts of new snow fall on layers
of snow and ice that have become unstable because of melting. They can also be
triggered by explosions or earthquakes.
Classification
Classification—distinguishing
types or classes—can help you explain a great deal of seemingly unrelated
information in an organized and easy-to-follow manner. Take this paragraph that
explains stringed instruments:
There are many types of
stringed instruments. The violin family is made up of the violin, viola, cello,
and double bass. Fretted instruments (frets are strips that show players where
to put their hands) include the banjo, mandolin, lute, ukulele, and guitar.
Related to these instruments are the lyre and the harp. The dulcimer, zither,
and psaltery form another family, whose strings are stretched over flat sound
boxes. Finally, there are the keyboard stringed instruments such as the piano, clavichord,
and harpsichord.
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NOTE:
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Once again, remember that two methods of development can be used
together. Read the paragraph on stringed instruments above again. See if you
can find places where the writer has used definition and description.
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There are many types of
stringed instruments. The violin family is made up of the violin, viola, cello,
and double bass. Fretted instruments (frets are strips that show players where
to put their hands) include the banjo, mandolin, lute, ukulele, and guitar. Related
to these instruments are the lyre and the harp. The dulcimer, zither, and
psaltery form another family, whose strings are stretched over flat sound
boxes. Finally, there are the keyboard stringed instruments such as the piano,
clavichord, and harpsichord.
A. EXERCISE
There are 5 paragraphs below.
Please identify what types of paragraph are they and why.
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(1)
The writing process has four distinct phases. (2) The first is invention,
which is aided by any number of techniques, including free-writing,
mind-mapping and outlining. (3)In this first stage, it’s important for a
writer not to edit but to let ideas flow and to simply get them down on
paper. (4) After invention, comes the first draft—the stage where the ideas
start to take shape. (5) Many writers use a sentence outline at this stage to
see where they need to cut and where they need to add material. The first
draft is also where writers should develop a tentative thesis to guide the
structure of their essay. (6)The next stage of the process is when both the
second and third drafts are done. (7)Here, ideas and structure are refined,
and the thesis is revised until it becomes the unifying idea of the paper.
(8)Finally, comes the last stage, that of editing. (9 Writers should take
care at this stage that all sentence structure and punctuation is correct,
and they should make corrections to documentation format as needed. (10)
Writers often repeat these four phases more than once, or skip a phase and go
back to it, making the writing process more cyclical than linear.
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(1)
The trail, perching precariously 500 feet above the roaring surf and then
dipping effortlessly into dark lush valleys, snakes its way along the fluted
coastline. (2) From a distance, it is hard to believe there would be any way
to traverse the cliffs that dip like fingers into the frothing Pacific.
(3)The first half of the trail is densely overgrown, and the air is dripping
with the aroma of over ripe guava. Waterfalls and streams cascade unceasingly
down along the trail from Mount Waialeale, the wettest spot on earth. (4)
Vegetation grows thickly on the near vertical slopes above and below the
trail, lending a sense of false security to the path, which at its widest
measures ten feet across. (5)The landscape on the second half of the trail,
the leeward side, changes dramatically from jungle to semi-arid desert.
(6)Now, the cliffs are bare rock, and a three-foot wide ledge is all that
protects the wary hiker from the black shoreline below.(7) Nevertheless, the
white sand beach that marks the end of the trail is more than ample reward
for the dangers survived.(8) The colors of this last valley, the Kalalau
Valley, are a vivid red and green against a cloudless blue sky. (9)This,
however, is not the end of the trip. The only trail out is the trail in. Not
for the faint of heart, the Kalalua Trail on Kauai’s north shore is eleven
miles of rugged adventure.
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(1)While
there were many contributing factors to the French Revolution, a primary
cause was a financial crisis brought on by royal extravagance. (2) For years
before the revolution finally exploded in 1789, the royal government had been
borrowing heavily to cover deficit spending. (Cobb, 1988.) (3) Even though
France’s high courts of appeal cautioned against such borrowing, the royal’s
extravagance continued, eventually resulting in a financial crisis that
required the government to institute a series of taxes. (4) As the press
highlighted the government’s spending with cartoons and stories, the
peasants, already burdened by high taxes, low wages and poor harvests, began
to resent the demands of the royals. (5)Finally, in 1789, the Third Estate—the
common people—became so enraged, they demanded a new constitution and refused
to compromise with the existing government until it was written. (6) This
demand set off the first sparks of revolution.
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Different students attend various types of schools;
however, they can usually be classified as either public, private religious,
private non religious, or alternative. Public schools are funded by the
state, and the majority of students in the United States attend them. Private
religious schools are based around a particular faith, such as Catholicism,
Judaism, and so forth. The religion is part of the every day lives of the
students and they also learn about the faiths. All types of private schools
do not receive state funding. Therefore, private non religious schools are
simply just that: schools which do not receive state funding and have the
ability to make their own rules. Alternative schools can be made up of a
variety of different categories, such as the Montessori program or technical
schools. Most students who attend class in an actual school building go to
one of these types of institutions.
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In
the relatively short span of sixty years,there has been an incredible
evolution in the size and capabilities of computer.Today, computer chips
smaller than the tip of your fingernail have the same capabilities as the
room-sized machines of years ago.The first computer wrere developed around
1945. They were so large that they required special air-conditioned rooms.
About twenty years later, in the 1960s, desk-sized computers were
developed. This represented a gigantic advance. Before the end of that
same decade, however, a third generation of computer,which used simple
integrated circuits and which were even smaller and faster, had appeared. In
1971, the first microprocessor,less thanone square centimeter in size, was
developed. Today modern microprocessors contain as many as 10 million
microprocessors doubles every eighteen months.
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